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how? i said so
why? i like fall
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commission for ~Secluded-Railroad, one of my very best friends here on deviantART (: I know it wasn't supposed to have a background but I didn't do full body and I felt bad, so I just did a quick one!hope everyone enjoys!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHi there! I saw this vibrant piece and decided to post a critique for it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>First of all, I LOVE the autumn colors! They make me happy X3 The kitty's face is SO cute as well. I love the shiny eye, very good detail in there. I also adore the fur texture in the markings! The bold lines give it a neat effect as well. There is a good balance between stylistic anatomy and realism.
Some things I would point out though are that the eyebrow over the closed eye would be lower than the other one, not higher! I would also define the whiskers more; they get lost in the fur and thick lineart.
I know that you made the bg quickly, but if you were to work more with it I would make it more of the style of the kitty, in that the tree trunks should be outlined in the same way. If they were I would make the lineart a bit thinner everywhere. Right now the bg doesn't meld well with the character. OR, you could eliminate the trees all together and just have the leaves as a backdrop. In fact, I like that ideas better haha <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>Again, love the colors and the cute kitty character!